good, but...
...the action stayed at a similar pace throughout, along with the music. There was never any suspense, just slow action. The characters werent likable either, in any way, which should be worked on. You placed the animation in the west as a setting, but it had nearly nothing similar between this and the real setting. You have some scenery that was familiar, but the bar was near empty, the streets were excessively barren, and nothing was distinct. Keep trying, you have potential.