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[Fight With Fact]

meh...

...you provided an argument, but no supporting facts to carry the message. The text had no impact, as the movement was too slow, and it was too short. You have a good basis for a quality flash, but you need to rethink your script/speech, and make the typography more eye-catching.

VirulentX responds:

Thank you for your post.

The assignment unfortunately needed it to be around 15 seconds, I even went overbound. :/

I believe, as many have told me however, that the text was even a little too quick, not too slow.

Finally, the audio wasn't mine, it's an already existing commercial that I "flashified".

Thank you for the criticism though, appreciate it.

[Carried by the Wind]

great!

I stopped paying attention to the writing though, because it detracted from the mood. (ironically, enough) I wish those were read aloud, by the narrator. To give him some character.

Cridia responds:

Yeah, the narrator was something I hadnt even considered while making this animation. Next time I am going to do something with a poem, I will :D!

Thanks for the comment!

[Portfolio]

ugh...

you overdid the menu thing. People hate having to wait for a simple text to explain buttons. I hated waiting for everything, as well, because it was slow.

[Running RNTB-man]

awesome!

really great job on the animation! The animation was smooth, realistic, and also entertaining.

[Warrior Boarder 4]

shallow....

but totally awesome, nonetheless! I am amazed at how you took such an absolutely horrid idea and made it seem awesome! Keep at it and make this thing go somewhere.