cmkinsac's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fight With Fact]

meh...

...you provided an argument, but no supporting facts to carry the message. The text had no impact, as the movement was too slow, and it was too short. You have a good basis for a quality flash, but you need to rethink your script/speech, and make the typography more eye-catching.

VirulentX responds:

Thank you for your post.

The assignment unfortunately needed it to be around 15 seconds, I even went overbound. :/

I believe, as many have told me however, that the text was even a little too quick, not too slow.

Finally, the audio wasn't mine, it's an already existing commercial that I "flashified".

Thank you for the criticism though, appreciate it.

[Carried by the Wind]

great!

I stopped paying attention to the writing though, because it detracted from the mood. (ironically, enough) I wish those were read aloud, by the narrator. To give him some character.

Cridia responds:

Yeah, the narrator was something I hadnt even considered while making this animation. Next time I am going to do something with a poem, I will :D!

Thanks for the comment!

[Dailytoon #400: Part 1]

I was expecting a piece of crap...

...but it was really well done, actually. Great job, and I might look into the other dailytoons now.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

aw thank U

[ELK Fables: Preview]

too short and no real animation....

This is way too short and is pretty much just tweens. Dont post a preview unless you have the majority of your animation done, or else you are just lowering your BA.

Dark-Frando responds:

This was just more of a 'getting my idea out there' that will affect my BA i know. However everyone has to start somewhere as you well know and I'm willing to make this sacrifice. The tweens I'll admit were used more as a sort of filler than they should of been, but it also takes time to make a character move a leg and such so I appreciate if you would understand that these animation efforts will be made in the actual series.

Thank you for the review =)

[Jedi vs. Ninja]

Really liked it but....

....the visuals could be a lot better. The animating was really great, and so was the camera angles and cinematography, but maybe go over them in each frame on a new layer with some better drawn characters. Try using a thinner brush or even drawing them with the pencil tool to the left of the brush. Either way, this was really good.

ActiveObjectX responds:

I might go back to the pencil tool(it's what i always used back in the day) sooner than later.

But i'll also try thinning the brush toooooo.

[-SFS 7-]

WTF?!

The first SFS was plain awesome, same with the second, but the third down, you slowly degraded to a piece of crap first-timer. What the hell? The first SFS you did awesome brush, but now you are doing noobish line? Line looks good.....unless you do it like that.

slowz responds:

thanks for the feedback, this shit sucked i made it when i was like 13