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meh...

...you provided an argument, but no supporting facts to carry the message. The text had no impact, as the movement was too slow, and it was too short. You have a good basis for a quality flash, but you need to rethink your script/speech, and make the typography more eye-catching.

VirulentX responds:

Thank you for your post.

The assignment unfortunately needed it to be around 15 seconds, I even went overbound. :/

I believe, as many have told me however, that the text was even a little too quick, not too slow.

Finally, the audio wasn't mine, it's an already existing commercial that I "flashified".

Thank you for the criticism though, appreciate it.

great!

I stopped paying attention to the writing though, because it detracted from the mood. (ironically, enough) I wish those were read aloud, by the narrator. To give him some character.

Cridia responds:

Yeah, the narrator was something I hadnt even considered while making this animation. Next time I am going to do something with a poem, I will :D!

Thanks for the comment!

meh...

The graphics are ok, but what ruined it for me was the horrible animations. Who shoots a gun without recoil? Where's the timing? More effort please. (and dont even try to say that I shouldnt speak, you will just make a fool of yourself)

cris17 responds:

=.= ok did ya not read the dam author comments? its a TEST MOVIE wich means its not the finished project and i was only testing certain things moron. your the one making a fool of your self here cause your putting alot of judgement into a TEST MOVIE.....wich is kinda stupid being as how well lets see since its a test movie i kinda know the crap i need to be doing better since i was ofcourse using this movie as a test, need i repeat my self a few more times before your small mind understands what obvious mistakes youve made in making this dumass review.

botched redeeming values...

...the only redeeming values of series like Naruto and the mainstream was completely ditched here with the again absolutely impossible combat of stickfigures. Stuff like FLCL, Avatar, and Fullmetal Alchemist would have been great ideas for this, but once I actually saw that you guys completely ditched the paced combat of these animes, I felt like you guys have wasted your talents on this collab. This isn't me getting mad about things not matching up in the animes to this, but the fact that you took HUMAN people from these animes and thrusted them into completely lifeless situations. Good animation, absolutely horrible choreography, and no effort into recreation of your chosen anime.

ssjbryando responds:

I agree with you in a certain part, but not a lot or half of these people are real anime fans, thus not exactly knowing how the usual combat is. (Checking youtube might not be enough) this is a stick animation, and I think youre taking it far to serious. Its basically choosing a theme, like FLCL ( the cannons) and making an animation out of it.

I wish you would have looked at it more like that, but thanks Cmkinsac <3 REMEMBER YOU.

anatomy?

your anatomy is kind of....off. The torso is a little long, and the legs a little thin. Otherwise good tutorial; I can make some good use out of that figure skeleton part for animating.

skarl3tte responds:

well, yeah, the anatomy's slightly off, but that's my style. I can't help it. =P

I was expecting a piece of crap...

...but it was really well done, actually. Great job, and I might look into the other dailytoons now.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

aw thank U

too short and no real animation....

This is way too short and is pretty much just tweens. Dont post a preview unless you have the majority of your animation done, or else you are just lowering your BA.

Dark-Frando responds:

This was just more of a 'getting my idea out there' that will affect my BA i know. However everyone has to start somewhere as you well know and I'm willing to make this sacrifice. The tweens I'll admit were used more as a sort of filler than they should of been, but it also takes time to make a character move a leg and such so I appreciate if you would understand that these animation efforts will be made in the actual series.

Thank you for the review =)

Really liked it but....

....the visuals could be a lot better. The animating was really great, and so was the camera angles and cinematography, but maybe go over them in each frame on a new layer with some better drawn characters. Try using a thinner brush or even drawing them with the pencil tool to the left of the brush. Either way, this was really good.

ActiveObjectX responds:

I might go back to the pencil tool(it's what i always used back in the day) sooner than later.

But i'll also try thinning the brush toooooo.

WTF?!

The first SFS was plain awesome, same with the second, but the third down, you slowly degraded to a piece of crap first-timer. What the hell? The first SFS you did awesome brush, but now you are doing noobish line? Line looks good.....unless you do it like that.

slowz responds:

thanks for the feedback, this shit sucked i made it when i was like 13

I am always trying to get better at flash and am working on traditional animations, which I cant show because I have no scanner.

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