Age/Gender: 20, Male
Location: Sacramento, CA
Job: Student
I am always trying to get better at flash and am working on traditional animations, which I cant show because I have no scanner.
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...you provided an argument, but no supporting facts to carry the message. The text had no impact, as the movement was too slow, and it was too short. You have a good basis for a quality flash, but you need to rethink your script/speech, and make the typography more eye-catching.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your post.
The assignment unfortunately needed it to be around 15 seconds, I even went overbound. :/
I believe, as many have told me however, that the text was even a little too quick, not too slow.
Finally, the audio wasn't mine, it's an already existing commercial that I "flashified".
Thank you for the criticism though, appreciate it.
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I see a future effects animator here! Wonderful stuff, dazzling effects, and the animation quickly got way better.
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I stopped paying attention to the writing though, because it detracted from the mood. (ironically, enough) I wish those were read aloud, by the narrator. To give him some character.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the narrator was something I hadnt even considered while making this animation. Next time I am going to do something with a poem, I will :D!
Thanks for the comment!
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The graphics are ok, but what ruined it for me was the horrible animations. Who shoots a gun without recoil? Where's the timing? More effort please. (and dont even try to say that I shouldnt speak, you will just make a fool of yourself)
Author's Response:
=.= ok did ya not read the dam author comments? its a TEST MOVIE wich means its not the finished project and i was only testing certain things moron. your the one making a fool of your self here cause your putting alot of judgement into a TEST MOVIE.....wich is kinda stupid being as how well lets see since its a test movie i kinda know the crap i need to be doing better since i was ofcourse using this movie as a test, need i repeat my self a few more times before your small mind understands what obvious mistakes youve made in making this dumass review.
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you overdid the menu thing. People hate having to wait for a simple text to explain buttons. I hated waiting for everything, as well, because it was slow.
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I dont really get most of it. You provide a lot of the stuff too quickly, so it detracts from the fun.
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really great job on the animation! The animation was smooth, realistic, and also entertaining.
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I found that despite all of the other features, the main feature: the blue orb you swing around is a horrible mechanic. Keep everything else of this, but find some other way to destroy the orbs which would be FUN.
Author's Response:
Huh, well each to his own I guess but that's the basis of the game, and most people really like it.
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sorry for the lower rating, but you really need to continue this before posting it! Finish it, because it was otherwise very awesome!
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I am sorry, but whatever effort was put into the flash was destroyed by the music. The music is absolutely terrible. Especially the voices, which wasnt even in sync to anything. I feel sorry for the flash artist. :(
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