cmkinsac's Reviews

[Fight With Fact]

meh...

...you provided an argument, but no supporting facts to carry the message. The text had no impact, as the movement was too slow, and it was too short. You have a good basis for a quality flash, but you need to rethink your script/speech, and make the typography more eye-catching.

VirulentX responds:

Thank you for your post.

The assignment unfortunately needed it to be around 15 seconds, I even went overbound. :/

I believe, as many have told me however, that the text was even a little too quick, not too slow.

Finally, the audio wasn't mine, it's an already existing commercial that I "flashified".

Thank you for the criticism though, appreciate it.

[Open Here]

Amazing man!

I see a future effects animator here! Wonderful stuff, dazzling effects, and the animation quickly got way better.

[Carried by the Wind]

great!

I stopped paying attention to the writing though, because it detracted from the mood. (ironically, enough) I wish those were read aloud, by the narrator. To give him some character.

Cridia responds:

Yeah, the narrator was something I hadnt even considered while making this animation. Next time I am going to do something with a poem, I will :D!

Thanks for the comment!

[Love to jump]

eh...

I dont really get most of it. You provide a lot of the stuff too quickly, so it detracts from the fun.

[Sproing Reloaded]

boring....

I found that despite all of the other features, the main feature: the blue orb you swing around is a horrible mechanic. Keep everything else of this, but find some other way to destroy the orbs which would be FUN.

squidsquid responds:

Huh, well each to his own I guess but that's the basis of the game, and most people really like it.

[Animating a Hand]

awesome!

this turned out great! Way better than your previous one, and was actually kinda helpful for me. I loved your introduction animation to the fingers, it was well animated. Overall, 5/5 10/10 man!

tomocles responds:

thanks man, I like your reviews. :P